Thursday, March 22, 2012

Strange Comments

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Swimming down the road in the deep dark in search of
Something of my life suddenly surfacing out at the top of
The surface from me within inside looking out at me
A thing of very strange ……………………………….
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Abdul Wahab
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Roong S 13 July 2012

What is it? I'm curious..you have written so well, you have taken me with you all along the maze!

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Pheko Motaung 25 March 2012

Your poems Abdul Wahab....deeply philosophic they are.Very insightful they'll always be.Influential they are to me.Thanks for it all

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 24 March 2012

wonderful philosophical poem! i like it very much....

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Wahab Abdul 24 March 2012

The strange gust of feelings which lies in the subconscious mind, it seldom got the form of a concrete thought and the mind never remains in vacuum , so is the condition of the mind, a condition of strangeness..................... ..................................................................................................................................................................................................... none can avoid this strange condition of the mind, it is impossible to any one.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2012

It never allows me to live; it never allows me to die, It is not showing me the truth but it is surely not the lie.. over come strange things, it is nothing to do with any thing

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Aditi Khandelwal 22 March 2012

What is it really? This is strange but in a good way... Every line of the poem has two completely opposite Parts... that is what makes the poem so purely strange in a beautiful way! Aditi

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