In fraction of seconds
The known becomes unknown
confused and unaware of the reason
Haven't been told or revealed
...
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I loved this sensitive write. We not only see loneliness we feel it.
A great poem on solitude and loneliness. Loved the last two lines, so artistic. I salute the great human being in you, Rini. 10++++++++ for such a lovely poem. Subhas
Wow! ! What a beautiful poem Sharing.i enjoy this lovely poem 10+++++****
This little poem carries much depth with a very touching poetic expression.Excellent piece of Work is shared..10
Perfect expression on loneliness. Nice combination of feelings with nature. Beautiful poem shared. Thank u Rini for sharing this.10
Hi Rini, The feelings of loneliness, separation, emptiness etc.. so vividly expressed... Lovely poem...10++
Great poem about being stranded on a lonely island. It would be better to have company if a person gets stranded.
In fraction of seconds The known becomes unknown..............just in fraction of a second!