Sunday, November 12, 2017

Stranded On A Lonely Island Comments

Rating: 5.0

In fraction of seconds
The known becomes unknown
confused and unaware of the reason
Haven't been told or revealed
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

In fraction of seconds The known becomes unknown..............just in fraction of a second!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

I loved this sensitive write. We not only see loneliness we feel it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 26 November 2017

A great poem on solitude and loneliness. Loved the last two lines, so artistic. I salute the great human being in you, Rini. 10++++++++ for such a lovely poem. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Subhas for your kind words

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Rajendra Rout 21 November 2017

Wow! ! What a beautiful poem Sharing.i enjoy this lovely poem 10+++++****

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Rini Shibu 21 November 2017

Thanks Rajendra..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2017

This little poem carries much depth with a very touching poetic expression.Excellent piece of Work is shared..10

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Rini Shibu 14 November 2017

Thanks Dillip, your words are encouraging

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2017

Perfect expression on loneliness. Nice combination of feelings with nature. Beautiful poem shared. Thank u Rini for sharing this.10

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Rini. 13 November 2017

Thanks Kumar for reading the perfect meaning

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 November 2017

Hi Rini, The feelings of loneliness, separation, emptiness etc.. so vividly expressed... Lovely poem...10++

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Rini. 12 November 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan.. Glad that you captured the feel

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Lamar Cole 12 November 2017

Great poem about being stranded on a lonely island. It would be better to have company if a person gets stranded.

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Rini. 12 November 2017

That would be great.. Thanks for the comment

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