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heres feedback- ilove this i was just thinking about the existence of myself and this put everything in my life to words

this is a poem, it's deep and emotional, you have every creative way of sending a message to your audience, great job ^w^

I liked the lines: For I have kept the ashes, The remains of fondest memories. And: Oh, I regret... I regret the massacre that was my voice. And: I am but a lonely being now, Reminiscing the taste of honey. It looks like you're in a cage waiting for something or someone or maybe something to forget. I really enjoyed reading this poem. A great write. Keep penning. B.B.

Wonderful poem, nice to read all through.

It is beautiful and very true keep on writing