Friday, August 8, 2008

Strait-Jacket Comments

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At first, he felt cozy in his new jacket,
zippered, buttoned, laced,
straight-laced like his attitude.
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Sonny Rainshine
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Ian Bowen 08 August 2008

Sonny, I feel there is a good message behind your poem. Well written as always. Ian

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Chhavi Anupam 08 August 2008

This is brilliant. Very true.... what comes naturally to you is beautiful....but still there is no dearth of hypocrisy.Almost everybody is wearing a cloak..it scares. Chhavi Anupam

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