Straightening Waves Comments

Though it is a blues poem yet it has full of hope and inspiring. The compassion, empathy and hope of a poetess has been reflected here clearly. It is sure oneday oue bodies will be mingled with dust still we can enjoy jokes by smiling or laughing. Chemo can bring a cancer patient smile in her or in his lips. Body is perishabe but soul is immortal. It will take next birth as per karma, so we mustn't be worried. Dear soul, your expression on pain and hope is touching and didactic. Let me quote some lines here... . We all waiting there in departure station Going to forever destination This all upon our completion creation Where's death come after life joined And 'end' ending the start point Tell you again to believe Secret future only God hold So give up should not be told Fight and strength to bold Paint vein with deep pain Cant change but faith to gain World still no end to pass Just smile, raise your glass Elegantly confident in class I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote.

Every Single Word Absolutely Beautifully Told! ! ! ! ! Love, Strength And Faith Always Hold! ! ! ! ! ...Tell You Again To Believe, Secret Future Only God Hold, So Give Up Should Not Be Told, Fight And Strength To Bold. Excellently Penned All The Way Through! ! ! ! ! Another Powerfully Heart Felt Poem From You! ! ! ! ! Thank You Dearly For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! ! Many Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Saved! ! ! ! !

Very moving poem, sadly life can throw some harsh things at us but our spirits always seem to be able to fight on.

Breathe! To walk along and to respect nature. Nice piece of work.

Words that need to be said, so heartfelt and thoughful. Your compassion and hope show straight through through your words. Great write on the sadness and hope of overcoming sickness. Thank you for sharing.

A great tribute to the saddest victims of Cancer and with the staightening waves you take us all to witness the peril and its periphery!