Friday, July 25, 2008

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Moved to the bottom of the sea
staying out of the sun's life.
Head low, missing the trees.
Deep inside breathes a knife,
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Alone Tone
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Keith Foley 08 August 2008

Interesting and thought provoking piece. Would enjoy reading more from you.

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Viola Grey 26 July 2008

this piece is stunning....I await more

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Ency Bearis 25 July 2008

A nice metaphor...keep on writing... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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