Wednesday, December 27, 2017

Straddler Of Worlds Comments

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Surf on the crest of a solar flare
Skirting the icy suburbs
Of a glowing Mercury.
String the Pleiades in a star necklace
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Rod M.Peters
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bri edwards 12 February 2018

, Laurie caught the typo first! ! : (

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bri edwards 12 February 2018

** HUMDRUM: adjective: 1. lacking excitement or variety; dull; monotonous. // synonyms: mundane, dull, dreary, boring, tedious, monotonous, uninvolving, prosaic; unexciting, uninteresting, uneventful, unvaried, repetitive, unremarkable; routine, ordinary, everyday, day-to-day, workaday, quotidian, run-of-the-mill, commonplace, garden variety, pedestrian..........................BRI ;)

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bri edwards 12 February 2018

i understand humdrum **! it's ME. the rest is very astronomical, which is neither a positive nor a negative comment. you have fun writing about this, don't you! ? (TO BE CONTINUED) ....

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Rod Mendieta 13 February 2018

Oh indeed, and no, I don't smoke any weed! Some of us just have weird stuff in the gullivera (that's Clockwork Orange slang for head) .

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Laurie van der Hart 29 December 2017

Wow, Rod, this is imaginative! I'm ready to take off... Line: You are the phantom straddler or words - did you mean worlds, or is it a reference to poets as creators of new worlds?

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Rod Mendieta 03 January 2018

Boy, you have a blessed pair of eyes there; sure can spot a typo miles away! Thanks Laurie, will correct immediately.

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