Saturday, March 21, 2009

Story's End (Pt.1 Of 3) Comments

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These words won’t come easy, these words are lucky to fall at all.
In a time when she was diein’, I asked the lord above to save her soul
Pure at heart, she doesn’t deserve to die. I yelled at him.
Only with a promise, I’ll do as you ask. Nodding my head. I accepted.
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Janell Cressman 04 August 2009

YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS POEM! ! ! ! ! ! i just read this and it made me cry, you have such a gift with words, This is an amazing poem,

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