Story-Poem One.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Story-Poem One....

Rating: 5.0


Story-Poem One:
around the clock:

those drizzly drops,
the fine rain tears,
continue this morning,
it's fun, but you don't get soaked
and don't stay bone-dry,
but you're still very happy
with the tears from the rain.

topics: life, nature around me, rainy day,
rain drops, rains

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
A.D. Saturday 11 July 2020-

Saturday, July 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,rain drops,rains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Around the clock, about myn life, about nature around me, about the rainy day, about raindrops, about rains.

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
A.D. Saturday 11 July 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2020

Cloud tears and rain too tears with drizzle drops. You have nicely captured the imagery in this story poem. Witnessing a rainy day we witness the beautiful creation of God. We thank God for his grace. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2020

Tears as rains from the sky eyes slacken the heart agony of sky dwellers.... That's why they are happy

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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