(*story Of Us* Comments

This is beautiful i love how you break the sentences to lines its such a wonderful write! reminds me of the movie the notebook! 10+++

The plants they grow without the sun and I no longer remember where I'm from the years go by my memory crys for attention of regrets yet somehow I've manged not to forget....... hmm sweet again a good poem..sweet.. and well wirtten, here you are again keeping variables and making hypothesis type idea in a very interesting way.. really impressed from your poems, specially from this one.. well done and liked it much 10/10

Wow. That was pure amazing. And I'm being completely honest, not just trying to make you feel good. Experimental and interesting structure, good use of suspense and great emphasis at the end of each stanza.