Story Of The Weak Pt.I Comments
'It really is a shame...'
He thought as he sat on the edge of his bed,
Face buried and hidden in his hands
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Good poem, And it does sound like a story for the weak, someone who undoubedly does not deserve to live but is too weak to let the one deserving of there blood to ease them into oblivion...So Weak....
WOW...That's really the only intelligent thing I can say right now.....Your really good.....I think that if anything it gives off the images and I can actually see everything described in this poem...Beautiful write..... <3Payton
this poem is really vivid. i can see this all taking place. very haunting.
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7/23/2025 9:55:01 AM # 1.0.0
Been there many times, Now glad I didn't have the courage to complete that journey