Wednesday, November 17, 2021

Story Of The Night ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the morning bells rang
And the moon slunk in the horizon
And the candles melted in our eyes
while we sat close to each other this night
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

Yes, the story of night is written in its natural way...a fabulous poem Dr Nehal....loved it

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 November 2021

Wow so well thought Dr. M.Asim

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David Wood 17 November 2021

Love makes all things possible and the wind writes loves story on all things.

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Anjandev Roy 17 November 2021

This is an exceptional write.....thank u.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 November 2021

The last line was the most beautiful line that you have written so far

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 November 2021

A poetic gem! Each and every stanza stands out showing the beauty of nature and love. To my Poem List.

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Michael Jack 17 November 2021

Yes written every where now, I realized, that the golden sun rays and the flowing southern wind Is already writing on each bud and flower our story of the night.

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Mamta S 17 November 2021

Not just one night but the whole life's story nicely summed up.5 Stars

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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