Saturday, November 19, 2016

Story Of The Loved, The Married And The Troubled. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loved one, and married the unloved,
Loved the married better than the loved,
Lived with the married longer than the loved,
Neglected the loved for the married.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Tajudeen. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Tajudeen Shah 03 December 2018

hi, thank you very much for reading. well, i would love to read some of yours. be in touch. keep exploring the untapped caverns of imaginations and passions.

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Tajudeen Shah 19 November 2016

Thank you very much for your attention and reviews. Please note, i left one word intentionally in the poem, which is very important to clear off a small confusion, and that word in my view has just 3 letters, and if you suggest and agree, i would like to edit and add that word, for clearing the mist. Please suggest. cheers. Regards and so much love for your patience. ahhaha

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