Story Of Stillness Comments
"I had heard sometimes
The frivolous whispers
Of the wind, when it breathed
Carelessly in the quiet freedom
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That is an amazing composition... Observation is the best tool a poet can use in it's own style... Looking beyond an ordinary mind can reach is known to be a blessing but one shud handle it with care... And you have done all justice here in this beautiful poem... Regards, Kamran
Strangely You are contended with it, but it goes on. RElating nature to human miseries is a good theme 10
A fabulous meaningful composition Seema........poetically penned. I loved the imagery you painted and the choice of words.10+++++
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8/2/2025 7:30:23 PM # 1.0.0
...... I had heard the screams..... till the end; too good for words!