Thursday, May 29, 2008

Story Of Our Life Comments

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Instilled inside of me are the
memories you left behind

Stored with every laughter, joy
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Bonnie Collins
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Ana Zaldivar 31 January 2009

Bonnie this is another of your great poems. VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL! I could feel you in every word! Love, ana

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Bob Gibson 12 September 2008

That uniform meant i could loose him, though he was pledged to me our country he now fights for, is far across the sea He takes with him my picture, and strings from a loving heart he will play them over and over never ending from the start

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Abha Sharma 29 May 2008

the memories keep the story of life alive for ever...which time can never snatch, sensitive piece instilling ever fresh emotion in the lines... Abha

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2008

That uniform does change lives - Such as in THE GREAT GADSBY

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Coach Roth 29 May 2008

Beautiful, gentle memories...nicely done...Coach

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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