Friday, April 23, 2010

Story Of My Tears And Dreams. Comments

Rating: 4.9

I collected my tears
In a dry coconut shell.
You know They glittered in the sunshine.
My tears are diamonds.
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Dr. Antony Theodore
COMMENTS
Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2018

What an incredible poem! Love for a dying mother. Fantasy love for the princess. Jealousy and evil from the king. And at the center of it all is innocence. Excellent write, Tony. Thank you for the invite.

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Susheela Shiju 28 October 2018

oh my! it's straight from your heart! can read your mind dear Tony! 10++++

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Steve Howard 21 April 2018

A story of love in its many forms and needs transcending the boundaries of conformity and status.

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Rae Seagull 06 April 2018

An interesting poem with good imagery! 10

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Baharak Barzin 06 April 2018

very emotional and I wonder why would you gather your dreams in thin plastic bag

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Houda Boukassoula 30 March 2018

deep emotional ad philosophical write a big 10.

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White Tiger 11 March 2018

A truly deep emotional write. I thank you for sharing this wonderfully written poem Dr. Theodore.

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Stephanie T Castillo 06 March 2018

Truly amazing of a young one who's love so pure can see the embrace of love. Lovely poem.

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David Kinyanjui 03 March 2018

Beautiful poem

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Hazel Durham 12 February 2018

Beautiful imagery and a very creative story with a sad ending but the princess gave in a kind and caring way before the king showed how cruel life can be but the princess is the one you will always remember! Superb write! !

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Kostas Lagos 10 February 2018

Thank you for inviting me to read this poem.Truly remarkable! I salute you!

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Glen Kappy 08 February 2018

hey, tony! my first time reading this, my first time that i remember reading something of yours that made me wonder if it came in a dream. what mainly stands out to me is the memory of the princess. a single act of kindness can rise like a mountain from the sea of mundane or bad memories, can be a beacon in darkness. -glen

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Kelly Iyogun 06 May 2016

Wow this do tell a story not everyone would understand your pains nor dreams, the ones who do would love you for it and those who won't would ask for your head. Thanks Dr. Antony Theodore for sharing it was inspirational

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Tom Billsborough 22 April 2016

The princess saw the tears and dreams as the gifts of love but some do not. A complex story beautifully told, a parable. Tom billsborough

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 April 2016

This is what poor people have to go through in life. Dreaming big is a sin for them.Very nice.

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Liza Sudina 14 March 2016

Tony! it is so stirking! so painful! My mom was ill not so long ago and I feel your pain freshly now. your poem reminded me Brodsky's poem - when he sent a tear as a diamond in a ring for his bride (he never married his first love) .

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Stephanie Hazle 12 March 2016

Simple. In Heaven there will be stories told of astonishing earthly experiences that may thrill unsuspecting heavenly beings...and this story will be one.

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Ozark Mountain Homegrown 10 March 2016

Do you remember it because it was just a dream? Or do you remember it because death is not the end, but only the beginning of a new story? Great poem filled with vivid imagination and suspense! Liked it a lot!

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Tessa Roods 07 March 2016

Nice Work. I like the idea of collecting tears and dreams.

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Anne Yun 06 March 2016

it truly can arise our delicate feelings, and Woolf said thatthe very reason why that poetry excites one to such abandonment, such rapture, is that it celebrates some feeling that one used to have, so that one responds easily, familiarly, without troubling to check the feeling, or to compare it with any that one has now.yours bring us to the same kind of childhood tears and dreams and always easily sad imaginations, thanks a lot

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