Thursday, August 27, 2015

Story Of My Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

HER NAME IS_______
I SEE HER TWO FACES,
FIRST WAS WHEN SHE WAS MY CLOSEST FRIEND AND
SECOND WAS WHEN SHE TURNED INTO A STRANGER WHEN I PROPOSED HER
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DEEPANSHU MALIK
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

My closed friend! We all need one; however, life is also with love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepanshu Malik 25 March 2016

yes you are right we all need one,

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Smile in you face, all the time they want to take your place. Powerful writing.

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Deepanshu Malik 04 January 2016

thanx savage for reading this poem

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Hazel Durham 22 September 2015

Bursting with pain and sadness that explodes on the page with your raw passion that is so touching and beautiful to read. Well done, I really enjoyed this beautiful write!

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Deepanshu Malik 24 September 2015

thanx hazel for reading this poem

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Maria Gonzalez 20 September 2015

This is very sad..... In situations like this, it is better not to chase, but to pull. Become very attractive in your personality and accomplishments. Then just like a light and you will attract the moth you always wanted and several moths more during.

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Deepanshu Malik 24 September 2015

thanx for suggestion tanya, i will follow your suggestion

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Charity Nduhiu 14 September 2015

I am so sorry for you because there is nothing so sad like losing a loved one but there's more pretty fish in the sea. Nice write

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Deepanshu Malik 14 September 2015

thanq nduhiu

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

A sad tale, Deepanshu. I wish you peace

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Deepanshu Malik 31 August 2015

thanx sir for reading this.

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