Story Of Desire Comments

beautiful write. so far i think poetry is a gift gifted by God directly. sometime i get so many flow at a time and sometime i have to count the time. so leave on the Almighty. keep it up

Yes, it's a compulsive force, a pleasant compulsion...this desire to join pen with paper, the poem speaks aloud about the unrest one feels when the urge to write is strong, and when all attempts to seek for the right inspiration get unsuccessful: I looked inside as well as outside But failed to find a subject to describe The wind blew and moon appeared But they did not made my mind delight... this poem is written about writing a poem, in almost the same vein of The Thought-Fox BY Ted Hughes...

...and at last the subject expressed itself!

Its a very nice poem but the rhyme scheme if there is one is off