Story For The Gods Comments

Top score for the story for the Gods!

A thoughtful, forthright and insightful poem, dear Poet Okim. Stay blessed!

Forthright utterances set aside for honest contemplation. An insightful patriotic poem nicely put together with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...

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Part 3. In elections, ‘brown envelopes' change hands in some parts of India even today. And ak47 also do speak for the rogue politicians occasionally.

The poet's notes and explanation for the colloquial words were quite helpful in enjoying the poem. Thank You.

A very bold and powerful write. But, dear Okim, politicians are of the same hue, anywhere in the world. Eternal vigilance of every citizen is needed to force them to walk the talk. So that the nation is saved. Top score for the poem. Hard work ahead, dear poet. All the best.