Saturday, November 1, 2008

Story Book- Comments

Rating: 2.3

I read a story book today
That resembled my life
And saw all my prince Charming’s
That turned out to be a waste
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Travis Richardson 12 November 2008

even though this is a new style, you pulled it off. try to use more emotive language

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