Wednesday, May 29, 2024

..Storms Of The Heart.. Comments

Rating: 4.8

How do I fight the night. When
my heart slams into my chest with
a pain so sharp and strong. As I
gasp and reach out for you, like
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Rebecca Navarre
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Michael Cochrane 09 June 2024

Heartfelt poem of loss.

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2024

Outstandingly, unforgettable. To my very favorites.

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2024

So painfully expressed, this magnificent poems reaches heights of grandeur that no one who reads it can forget.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

Liked the powerful closure lines that strike through the heart. Top Marks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

The abounding images embedded in this wonderful poem are so compelling that a reader could feel outright the void felt by the author. So beautifully expressed! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

A great depiction of loss and grief. It expresses in detail the various emotions felt by the Poetess. So deeply poignant and touching.

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Bill Cantrell 29 May 2024

Very sad poem, touchingly written exposing emotions, storms of the heart can be devastating. Excellent skills…be proud, great write! ! !

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M. Asim Nehal 29 May 2024

The difficulties to cope up with the loss is nicely expressed in you above poem, I go with the flow and feel the pain as you did. Full******

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