How do I fight the night. When
my heart slams into my chest with
a pain so sharp and strong. As I
gasp and reach out for you, like
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So painfully expressed, this magnificent poems reaches heights of grandeur that no one who reads it can forget.
Liked the powerful closure lines that strike through the heart. Top Marks
The abounding images embedded in this wonderful poem are so compelling that a reader could feel outright the void felt by the author. So beautifully expressed! ! !
A great depiction of loss and grief. It expresses in detail the various emotions felt by the Poetess. So deeply poignant and touching.
Very sad poem, touchingly written exposing emotions, storms of the heart can be devastating. Excellent skills…be proud, great write! ! !
The difficulties to cope up with the loss is nicely expressed in you above poem, I go with the flow and feel the pain as you did. Full******
Heartfelt poem of loss.