..Storms Of The Heart.. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

..Storms Of The Heart..

Rating: 4.8

How do I fight the night. When
my heart slams into my chest with
a pain so sharp and strong. As I
gasp and reach out for you, like
you're standing right there reaching
back too. But, then my mind says
I can't hold onto someone who's
gone. But, my heart screams out
you're wrong! .. While the thunder
crashes and the storms just go on
and on. And the night, can feel so
long.

Wednesday, May 29, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,grief,death,heartache
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 29 May 2024

The difficulties to cope up with the loss is nicely expressed in you above poem, I go with the flow and feel the pain as you did. Full******

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Bill Cantrell 29 May 2024

Very sad poem, touchingly written exposing emotions, storms of the heart can be devastating. Excellent skills…be proud, great write! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

A great depiction of loss and grief. It expresses in detail the various emotions felt by the Poetess. So deeply poignant and touching.

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Michael Cochrane 09 June 2024

Heartfelt poem of loss.

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2024

Outstandingly, unforgettable. To my very favorites.

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2024

So painfully expressed, this magnificent poems reaches heights of grandeur that no one who reads it can forget.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

Liked the powerful closure lines that strike through the heart. Top Marks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2024

The abounding images embedded in this wonderful poem are so compelling that a reader could feel outright the void felt by the author. So beautifully expressed! ! !

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