Storms Comments

I like this for the way you manage to relate the physical aspects of the storm back to humanity.

I absolutely love this.From the cowering of the birds to the remembrance of the widower, the storm approaches and undulates like a tide, flowing on the ABBA rhyming pattern. Bloody excellent. Danny

I love storms... and your moody poem perfectly demonstrates the damage unleashed when his plan is delivered. Poignantly penned with a sympathetic touch. Enjoyed. HG: -) xx