I see the silhouette against the sunset of your bright life
I feel the bright life of emotion slowly going on strife
I perceive, it will be flooded with rain, your tears
Gloom is coming, that's what I fear, to you can adheres
                
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I liked it, imagination used is visual. nature is dark - storm, turbulance - nature is beautiful - radiant sunrays. Both are expressed justly.
Good poem. Like it, a good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Running wolf.

 
                     
                
A very nice poem with a fantastic ending about the rainbow. Good, Ency. You are an excellent poet.