Tuesday, November 8, 2011

' Storm Will Fade ' Comments

Rating: 3.4

I see the silhouette against the sunset of your bright life
I feel the bright life of emotion slowly going on strife
I perceive, it will be flooded with rain, your tears
Gloom is coming, that's what I fear, to you can adheres
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Ency Bearis
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Hans Vr 11 November 2011

A very nice poem with a fantastic ending about the rainbow. Good, Ency. You are an excellent poet.

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Pari Dharawat 08 November 2011

I liked it, imagination used is visual. nature is dark - storm, turbulance - nature is beautiful - radiant sunrays. Both are expressed justly.

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Dave Walker 08 November 2011

Good poem. Like it, a good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Running wolf.

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