Storm Steps Comments

Straggled grass sits amid Sediment sand really enjoyed your first lines and especially 'storm of passionate irresistable irrational winds' such lines always tug at my soul :)

Reminds me of Earlams Beach, Dovercourt. Thanks.

The storms experienced in life so often leave us reaching for something beyond - very good write.

Very beautiful, strong imagery. Hits me particularly hard, being a resident of Joplin Missouri (tornado of May 22,2011) so brings back the memories of metaphors I found amist the rubble. Such a profound metaphor for loss. Thanks for sharing!

After a heavy storm A staircase stands alone All else is gone - nice projection

A very emotive poem with some memorable lines. I especially like ' Straggled grass sits amid' it conjures up a myriad of possible senarios which you compose later in the poem. Really nicely written.