Storm Song Comments

Adeline, I love your poems and this one is no exception A superb write.

my mind went on a journey with your words... thank you for the invite... exquisite writing, please continue

Adeline, what a beautiful poem. As a salt water sailor myself, I know well the dangers of life at sea. What an enjoyable read. Interesting as the classic tale now told in the third person. Dick Lackman

a beautiful poem Adeline enjoyed the read

How lovely and smooth this poem flows and makes one feel present during this conversation. Bravo!

Dynamic poetry at its best... loved it... Terry

This was fantastic, Adeline. The song of the siren - I've heard legends about that. I love stories about the sea. You held my attention right to the end, In fact, I wanted to read more! Wonderful poem!