Saturday, October 24, 2015

Storm Of Sadness Comments

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Sal lost the battle
and died deeply bruised,
his family stood saddened and bemused.
A lifeless body lays flat on stone,
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Melvina Germain
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Lyn Paul 24 October 2015

Your title is so suited to these words. Heartache expressed by your pen. Thank you

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Kelly Kurt 24 October 2015

These kinds of poems need to be written, to express what many feel.

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Melvina Germain 24 October 2015

Thank you for commenting Kelly.....

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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