Storm clouds that are black
Sprawled like cobra in the sky
They create great fear.
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An excellent little poem...pulsating expression.! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful work!
Sprawled like cobra.......brilliant. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
Sprawled like cobra in the sky......what a magnificent imagination! A brilliant little poem.....................10
When taken shelter storms are a theater of gathering armies fighting in the sky, their fury rains, and their tempest blows, and they ignite thoughts of imagination. I think your one of three writers on poem hunter who are the true masters of the haiku. Well done Rose, I shall be looking for storms.
Nature has many shades of colours...storm clouds stand for fear....nice observation Rose
I love this fantastic haiku, dear Ate Rose.........10++++++++++++
The same clouds that have made me ecstatic in love appear now a storm black clouds making fearful. Nature is full of contrasts.
Powerfully painted, of storms that darken skies! .. Excellent description of the way nature can be a times! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................+++++
Darkness! ! Black Sky! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nature imparts awe in you, Nature creates love in your heart, Nature is creator's art, And fear comes from unknown blue. Nature has all the rainbow colours, and more. A lovely piece.
As a child I sat constantly on my Mom's lap as there were storm clouds. IF I see those storm clouds again, that fear comes up again in me. Powerful brevity so perfectly presented. Though I got angst after having read the message, I can greatly appreciate the metaphors in the poem. They suit sublime. I have enjoyed this fascinating poem enormously. Truly a captivating poem.10++++++++++++
Sometimes I am afraid to go out Mam because of fear as described.