Wednesday, May 29, 2019

Storm Clouds Comments

Rating: 4.8

Storm clouds that are black
Sprawled like cobra in the sky
They create great fear.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 20 April 2023

Sometimes I am afraid to go out Mam because of fear as described.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2019

An excellent little poem...pulsating expression.! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful work!

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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2019

Sprawled like cobra.......brilliant. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2019

Sprawled like cobra in the sky......what a magnificent imagination! A brilliant little poem.....................10

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Kevin Patrick 09 June 2019

When taken shelter storms are a theater of gathering armies fighting in the sky, their fury rains, and their tempest blows, and they ignite thoughts of imagination. I think your one of three writers on poem hunter who are the true masters of the haiku. Well done Rose, I shall be looking for storms.

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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2019

Nature has many shades of colours...storm clouds stand for fear....nice observation Rose

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2019

I love this fantastic haiku, dear Ate Rose.........10++++++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 31 May 2019

The same clouds that have made me ecstatic in love appear now a storm black clouds making fearful. Nature is full of contrasts.

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Rebecca Navarre 31 May 2019

Powerfully painted, of storms that darken skies! .. Excellent description of the way nature can be a times! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................+++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 May 2019

Darkness! ! Black Sky! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

Nature imparts awe in you, Nature creates love in your heart, Nature is creator's art, And fear comes from unknown blue. Nature has all the rainbow colours, and more. A lovely piece.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 May 2019

As a child I sat constantly on my Mom's lap as there were storm clouds. IF I see those storm clouds again, that fear comes up again in me. Powerful brevity so perfectly presented. Though I got angst after having read the message, I can greatly appreciate the metaphors in the poem. They suit sublime. I have enjoyed this fascinating poem enormously. Truly a captivating poem.10++++++++++++

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Jennifer Birchall 30 May 2019

Brilliant poem in just a few lines.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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