Sunday, October 21, 2007

(*storm*) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did the white lightening strikes, alarm you?
Was the Thunders plowing, too deep?
Breaking, near to the sound barrier
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 21 November 2007

Thank you, my dear friend, for taking the time to read my work! Blessings and all good to you, Theo

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Melvina Germain 28 October 2007

The power and fear of this storm is vivid and clear, I feel as if I were actually there. Theo you have the ability to bring readers into your poems and that is a true sign of an excellent poet, I'll be back for more of course.--Melvina--

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