Thursday, October 23, 2014

Storm Comments

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Wind is showing its strength outside.
Hither and thither blowing things away.
Humans and animals run for refuge.
Large trees wildly shake and sway.
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Md. Asadullah
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Heather Wilkins 24 October 2014

storms rage almost every day but inside is a haven of safety good imagery

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Valsa George 24 October 2014

Though violent storms may be raging outside, if there is inner calm, we needn't worry at all ! The poem concludes with a profound contemplation on the state of our soul! Great write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

Storm to storm..analogous..inside and outside both are disastrous..nice poem thank you

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Sallam Yassin 23 October 2014

the last lines two they are most beautiful though I am save in this home firm but my frail soul is outside in the storm you touched the strings of humanity in my soul thanks bro

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