Storm Comments

Wow, you took my breath away, reading this. truly classic poetry at its best.

Nicely put, Alesia. I like a good thunderstorm poem.

Fantastic depiction about storm. My favourite lines are ..... Bolts of lightning streaked the sky illuminating the torrent of rain. I wondered when the storm might pass but it rumbled on again and again. Thanks for sharing madam. ....... 10

A good description of a storm and the human emotions

The storm in all its violence and ferocity is described! A great write, Alesia!

The words are so powerful and the impact is so profound that the reader virtually feels the ferocity of a real storm. This is now a favourite poem.

Wonderful storm rumbled again and again. So wise sharing really. Amazing drafting.