Saturday, December 21, 2013

Storm Comments

Rating: 3.0

Vast grass spreads before me, an endless sea,
Turning red and violet in the blazing storm.
The wind blows, burns my face
The rain falls, pricking me with its liquid arrows
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Fiona Schwartzinoff
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Sandra Feldman 21 January 2014

Masterfully, you are able to paint the scene of the storm and make us see and feel the effect it has on you. I especially like the lineThe wind weeps on a distressful note, see, that is what only poetry can do, make the wind Weep. I hear it crying...... the whole, poem, Well Done! S.

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