Monday, May 14, 2012

Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

I captain alone
Torn sails whip the bruised sky
Knuckles white
Eyes salted and wild
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Simon Collins
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Ken E Hall 22 May 2012

The storm in no teacup real life realism from the deep sea graves... compelling read indeed...regards

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Pheko Motaung 16 May 2012

A stunning brilliant poem! Great piece.Thanks

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Valerie Dohren 15 May 2012

Brilliant poem, very enjoyable read.

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Kasia Fedyk 14 May 2012

Simon, this poem is breathtaking. Isn't wonderful when the soul speaks! Thank you for this poem. Kasia

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Captain Cur 14 May 2012

Absolutely beautiful, descriptive and challenging piece of writing. I felt the moment. Sail on Simon!

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