Saturday, November 30, 2013

Stories That...... Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am not new
I am not old
Yet I have so... many stories, too be told
Stories that.... are my own
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Lyn Paul
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Smoky Hoss 26 December 2014

I love the idea of humanities stories, individual and collective; it's what we are, where we've been and where we all are bound. Very good, interesting poem this.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 December 2013

Beautiful poem Lyn. This is the stories of all of us to tell. Beautiful ending with strong determination.. I have lost I have found I can stand On solid Ground....This energy is required...Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 December 2013

So, I have lost.... I have found... I can stand.... A good resolve to face the world with determination. Nice poem of re-dedication. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 07 December 2013

I would love to hear your stories Lyn, but you have written of them here - well done.

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Hazel Durham 07 December 2013

Stories to make us smile, weep, rejoice, celebrate and to know we are just human, not perfect just trying to find our way in this amazing world! Great write!

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Rubab Atwal 05 December 2013

how true, the whole is full of stories in fact life itself is a story.beautifully written

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 December 2013

life is truly lived when we surmount failure but are not overwhelmed by success. great write, Lyn.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 December 2013

Wow wow im floored by this! Way to go lynne! ! Esp how u say, 'dealt blows to d blow, ha ha bravo u fellow lassie chick. I can relate to havin lots to tell too. Tour de force quality.

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Dee Corpolongo 02 December 2013

Lyn, this is another great poem that says it like it is, and how it shall be... from times that are lost, to each victory. and, we will survive. We all go though our trials and tribulations, but it is how you choose to learn the lesson. Love your most positive poems always! {{{hugs}}} and thank you.

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Lucifera Santez 02 December 2013

wonderful piece. this defines every one of us. a 10 from me. :)

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Paul Brookes 01 December 2013

Liked this. A survivors tale told with out self pity or regret full of experience and wisdom, in short, a well lived life. BB: O))

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Valsa George 30 November 2013

So very true Lyn! We all have many stories to tell.... stories of victory and defeat, stories of pain and joy, of hate and love.. betrayal and loyalty....! Such is life! Those who accept all with equanimity and hope become winners in life! I appreciate your sense of self worth! A great poem! Enjoyed! !

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