~ Store In Soul Slot ~ Comments

Heyy, i Love the way you described your poem in a very detailed way, sorry i couldn't reply earlier as i didn't have time to go on the computer PS. Keep up the good work, n Write till you dropp ;)

I definately won't forget you.

A great work! ! ! You have fabulous technique of expressing hidden emotions. keep it up. God bless you.10/10

Sounds like tip toeing the soul of love. Very nice :)

Poetry and music as one. So cleverly done and whimsical. It's very uplifting and great placement of words. Last line 'I'm hot shot, forget me not' great way to end it. Beautiful.

I'm hot shot, forget me not! ! wow...incredible, its not just that its poetry, it is also, words to live by everyday! Good job. totally love this poem

I am caught in a snap shot of soul slot. The hot shot on the romance spot has caused a heart lock.

How romantic! 'I've stored all the beautiful rhyming words in my 'soul Slot' Good job Niv a 10+++

Wow! ! Excellent emotional rhyming… ‘I’m caught/Coalesce n’ clot’ …nice metaphor ‘clot’ and ‘coalescing’ 14 Yeah such a lover must be in ‘Soul Slot’…beaus are desperate to get such lolol 10++

First I thank Sr. Poet Hasmukh Amathalal for a equally comment-poetry…I enjoyed it much and Hello Dear Niv you’re already in stored in Soul Slot…its neat and nifty with inter play of oozing emotion and wording…enjoyed much 10+

To Hon’ble Sr.Poet Hasmukh-ji. My poetry feeling greatly smitten aflamed and blooming in fervent flutter by your hued chromatic poetic additives …feeling levitation of joy and rejoice and thanks Sir ‘Smiling-Face’ Hasmukh-ji... lolol] Regards niv Copy to To Hon’ble Sr.Poet Hasmukh-ji.

As an ought Swap all allot Store in soul slot Love you lot I’m hot shot Forget me not........nicely composed and freely exposed with honet intention.. i liked its contents with utmost desire...niv smile at....10 never to forget but never to let If it is plain truth and fact i must cautiously behave and act to fall in but not to react you may remain in my house slot there is reservation in holy plot i was living like barren land To make it greener you extended hand You may remain forever hot I am also boiling water in pot It may be good if acted on spot Anxiety may end with enjoyment lot come and stay as much as you can I shall remain always your fan See to it that it moves like train I must get the seat without any rain You may shower with all your sweats It may also result in dry land to wet What may emerge from it as new creation It won't remain there as mere recreation......

‘Lo get you got.’ We too Ma’am…lolol Excellent rhyming type...laconic…dancing bee without sting but to be binged 10+++

As an ought Swap all allot Store in soul slot Love you lot I’m hot shot Forget me not. sure... its like you said so. impressive and heart knocking way is your thoughtful poetry

I love the love lock part the expresses the build up of romance in this poem. Very good write. Lynn a ten

Like tic-tac …lick lap … Yeah store in soul slot with ‘Swap all allot’ Thanks for such a romantic poem 10++

Short but expressive poem. ‘…Break all block // In heart lock…’ Very much appealing and styled: Chic and Chichi. AB LONDON

Like ‘ticktack’ poem is carrying us forward but it is LOVE WATCH [Machine and Look attentively]

Enjoyed the read. Short lines with a smiling theme.

Like chick…sleek...click...pluck… pick…tick… Enjoyed and thanks for sharing… 10+ Dr. V