Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Stopping The Sun Comments

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Do not let the sun set upon our skin
Keep Judgement day at bay
Electric signs blind my eyes and
Dollar bills float through my veins.
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Shawn Greyling
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Barry A. Lanier 28 April 2009

excellent...only...I wanted more.....ahhhhhh

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

Has a Robert Louis Stevenson vibe to it.. truly poetic..amazing work..well done

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