Stopped By A Lake On A Summer Noon Comments

Very descriptive right. Good luck.

Slowly the winds blows The heat punches the air; The lifeless trees Standing bowed down; Hoping for the rain to come, - - - - -Such a beautiful composition Archita Kumar.Your poem takes us along the nature walk.

very beautiful poem! a wonderful imagey! a true and fine topic: nature walks with the poetess as well as readers. i enjoyed reading it.

The milky white sky can be seen The doves and the ravens flies beneath the sky, But times flies as flies, I have miles left to go; He sighed a relief, Reminiscent of Robrt Frost's poem. very fine dear poetess. nature beautifully described and your philosophy at the end. thnku. tony

very enjoyable reading. Well done keep more flowing in

He stands behind the trees! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

He stands behind the trees The half asleep doves sits on the branches of trees; The hilarious plays of the squirrels, Invites his attentions; The left duff lings and the Ramon breads, ...............