Saturday, February 20, 2016

Stop Time Stop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Full stop
Though
Dying for thee
O' time!
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Hans Raj Sharma
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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 February 2016

Amazing yet welcome request to slow down it's pace made to time to enjoy the fruits of modern age achievements of man. In spite of the achievements there is no time to spend at one's own will due to modern life compulsions. A beautifully conceived thought provoking and meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rajnish Manga 20 February 2016

One should take time off to enjoy simple things in life. You have put across the whole idea quite beautifully. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Hans Raj ji. Even / The smallest breaks / Do wonders / To the mind / Body and soul.

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