Stop Time, Comments

Great poem, ... Starts with the night(negative) and morning came again(positive tins) .... Great idea! ....10 for me

Hey Char, this literary work of yours is wonderful, you got talent for writing did you know that? At first the poem tells the reader negative things around us and then in the folllowing lines the poem tells positive things happened. Happy days are here again! Where did you get such great idea? Well done...10+

yes...time; the symbol of life in motion...artful write...10

a fine fine write poignant poem indeed