Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Stop This Drink Comments

Rating: 4.5

War again started in this
Starry night…..
When yellow snow
fall on our window....
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Thampi KEE
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Raveendran . 19 November 2008

This is a brilliantly forgrounded poem, in cummings lines

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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

well thought and well penned........keep it up! !

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Kesav Easwaran 28 April 2008

yes...blood stained horrendous crimes over ethnic racial religion based fights follow you vehemently with vengeance all over the world...killings...the ensuing rapes...well, the womanhood and childhood have no other option but to run for their lives universally... thampi, ( meaning a younger brother in south indian vernacular) you are really a wise big brother in your deep in sight...

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Marvin Brato 09 August 2007

Good poemThampi... its just like you are saying 'Peace Not War! ' worth the 10.

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Kelsey B. 12 January 2007

Kee. this was beautiful not in the sence of war. but that this is your passion. to write of this. to tell how horrible it is. and you are going well. i guess every person takes poems differently. this was a lovely one.

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Shery Vincent 27 November 2006

hai kee, i can hear ur cry for world peace...a small effort sometimes will result more...hope this world will change....

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Jessica Thomas 27 November 2006

Wow. This poem crys of a war.

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Thampi KEE

Thampi KEE

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