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This is a brilliantly forgrounded poem, in cummings lines

well thought and well penned........keep it up! !

yes...blood stained horrendous crimes over ethnic racial religion based fights follow you vehemently with vengeance all over the world...killings...the ensuing rapes...well, the womanhood and childhood have no other option but to run for their lives universally... thampi, ( meaning a younger brother in south indian vernacular) you are really a wise big brother in your deep in sight...

Good poemThampi... its just like you are saying 'Peace Not War! ' worth the 10.

Kee. this was beautiful not in the sence of war. but that this is your passion. to write of this. to tell how horrible it is. and you are going well. i guess every person takes poems differently. this was a lovely one.

hai kee, i can hear ur cry for world peace...a small effort sometimes will result more...hope this world will change....

Wow. This poem crys of a war.