Thursday, June 16, 2011

Stop That Copying Of Me That You Do Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stop your copping on my duty,
That your are trying to scoop.
Stop your snooping to excuse it too,
Boo!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written very well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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