do we have the right
to be called human
just because we know
how to conceal our nudity?
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Very Pathetic situation Indira garu! All language movies made 'love' sacred and it has become worse than HIV virus and spreading all over the world. Moving poem. Thanks.
It depicts the present society in its true colours.It is not love but it is lunacy.A highly thought provoking poem
Whoa! Such behavior cannot be tolerated! I hope they sentenced him to be chopped up into little pieces.
As the infant learns every nuance and inflection in the spoken dialect of their parents, so too do they learn the cultural behaviours, to perfection, and it becomes their reality. in one land of peoples, nude beaches are the norm, in another, the woman is entirely covered except for slits for the eyes, and if a man so much as sees a bare arm, he is deeply affected. In some land, a woman who marrys against her fathers wishes, is subject to stoning. Once, in California, road rage was all the rage. It is like the birds, who when one of them discovered how to peck the coverings off of milk jars delivered to homes, it caught on like wildfire amongst the other birds. And so the rejected male, has learned this behavior to release his pain of rejection. Who is to blame? Has society been altered, where the tradition of parental involvement in finding matches has been abandoned, to leave the youth to their own resources in finding a partner? It is easy to express outrage, but a solution may need some study of uncomfortable details.
How pathetic. I see that this is poet's burden. One cannot carry it long one must let it out. Society must learn how to live peacefully.
wow... i don't know why but i think that i want to cry... nice write
M'am i can understand your rage...your anger....even i feel the same...Please read 'For Ruchika' and 'vow of Silence'
You have given voice to silent anger of the society. Your anger will inspire a good many of your readers. You may read two poems of mine on Haiti. Loved to read more of your poems.
no longer can i stand witness to a young girl’s body axed and shredded to innumerable pieces...........ya it is scene of the day in all the parts of country.....we have no rights.... simply beautiful......10 readmine...molestation bid.............cry not..............fine without you
A nice poem putting in question important conceptions and misbehaviours...
The poem 'stop not these tears' really thought provoking, heart touching.in simple words, in very understandable manner even to those who have little exposer to English language. Really very good emotional, thoughtful questionnaire.
This write raises some very pertinent questions which need to be pondered. A good, thought provoking and concerned poem.
It seems as a poem provoked by a local problem but it is far from this and much more than this - it is an appeal for humanity... in verses, emotional and poignant...
so contemporary to our part of the world... other places have equally testing areas that the young girls have to deal with u wrote a very emotional and exquisite piece a reminder of the darker niches of the world we live in thanx and its a tenner
AMAZING/ YOUR POEM IS SO MOVING, it gave me the Shivers. a good Methodology tells a Hurtful Reality. it deserves TEN.
A passionate and provocative rant against the obscenity of 'man's inhumanity to woman'. Your opening stanzas are filled with irony. Those that follow are heart-wrenching and deeply moving. Thanks for letting the world know what happens when we close our eyes to practices that legitimate power in the name of love. Excellent poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Such atrocities continue in our country till this day! All in the name of love