Trapped in a circle with no corner,
Going all around and always seem to falter,
Tired and exhausted and always end up weak.
I want to negotiate but can’t seem to speak.
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=(i hope uv already over come this experience. it just too bad it goes on and on even how hard we try. stay strong.. anyway, this is quite an emotional piece. i like it.
Thanks Liyo for liking this poem.. :) We all experience heartbreaks but to tell you honestly, I haven't felt that much intensity to the point of telling someone to come back and 'stop my cry (my plead, or my tears) . But we all know how it felt when someone left us (for awhile or maybe forever) , and it's really sad.