Tuesday, October 13, 2015

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Stop the bleeding of your heart
Wounded by the blades of lies;
Let the long stream of teardrops
Run dry in both your sad eyes.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Avid Fan 02 May 2019

Stop the bleeding of your heart Wounded by the blades of lies; Let the long stream of teardrops Run dry in both your sad eyes. An excellent poem, sir Bernard.

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Rajnish Manga 02 July 2018

A beautiful poem with a profound message of hope and positivity for the entire mankind. It's always a joy to read these compositions of infinite beauty. Thanks for sharing it, Sir.

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Thanks, Rajnish for your wonderful comment๐Ÿค“๐Ÿค“๐Ÿค“๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2015

Wounded by the blades of lies! But, do get up once again and, never give up on your dreams. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks, Edward for your stupendous response๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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