** Stop Killing Your Own ** Comments

When you mentioned in your poem, Nemo, are you referring to the cartoon character finding Nemo?

Amen. Cheers. Subroto

stop killing ur own coz it will destroy yourself... stop killing ur own coz it will affect human resources.... stop killing ur own and peace will remain.... STOP..! ! ! DONT KILL UR OWN.. I READ MANY TIMES THS POEM BUT SEEMS ITS MYSTERIOUS TO ME EVEN I CUD USE THE 24 HOURS OF READING STILL REMAINS NOT CLEAR TO ME. SO I HVE TO BE HONEST TO GIVE MY COMMENT TO THS PIECE HONEY, ITS ONLY THE TITLE I READ.... I DINT LOOK AT THE WORDS U WRITE I DINT COUNT HOW MANY LINES U MAKE I DINT CARE F U PUT COMMAS OR PERIODS THE TITLE ITSELF SATISFIES ME.. THS POEM S REALLY FANTASTIC..before i came, there r 82 visitors already so, , , cheers hon, , , ths s a good work done by a good poet, , , its u am talking about......smile....lav ya..

YUSOF, LET THIS POEM BE THE MESSAGE FOR THE NEW YEAR - 2009! A MESSAGE FOR ALL THOSE WHO BELIEVE IN MANKIND! Kindly read my - ' The Big Bad Wolf ', with a similar message! BEST WISHES FOR THE NEW YEAR - 2009! -RAJ NANDY

Wow, this is beautiful, a very nice portrayal and I love the wording.

ITS A VERY HEART TOUCHING POEM, MY BEST WISHES FOR YOU............

Your poems are beautiful. Thanks for pointing me to them. I wish we could come up with a poem that could take the hate out of this world. Maybe we could just dunk the whole world in a bottle of fabric softner.

not bad. Uses a fair few metaphors and a bit of imagery. Keep it up

thats another good poem, sometimes i wish i could write as you do but anyways i stick to my own work. keep up the good work, keep2x writing. well, you manage me to read all your poems. best wishes to you floyd minami

the message here is not lost on me - it is your heartfelt wish, as true of many, and using the blue ocean as a balance to the world of men is a great prop. keep keep keep writing dear friend.

this is a well written, deep poem. keep it up.

Terrific imagery, and well written. But you might want to check out some of your usage (e.g., 'breath' instead of 'breathe') , as I've noticed some recurring common mistakes. Still, nicely done...

That was incredibly vivid and descriptive in ways hard to describe. I'll just give it a 10 and leave it at that. Awesome work!

Thanks for sharing! Point well made.

Thank you for writing such amazing poem.....I can't wait to read your next masterpiece...

Profuse display of sheer verbiage! What counts most?

They’ve witnessed the rhythm of enormous blue waters The sparkling of bluer space above Ransacking their minds in believing Shouldn’t the world be as calm as these? There’s life everywhere The planktons and corals They’ve witnessed the rhythm of enormous blue waters The sparkling of bluer space above Ransacking their minds in believing Shouldn’t the world be as calm as these? There’s life everywhere The planktons and corals They’ve witnessed the rhythm of enormous blue waters The sparkling of bluer space above Ransacking their minds in believing Shouldn’t the world be as calm as these? There’s life everywhere The planktons and corals the poet makes a gild of real

i find it awesome,

i find it awesome, did u really understand my poem

i like it :) great work! i agree with Brett