Sunday, October 18, 2020

Stop And Stare Comments

Rating: 4.0

Fifty eight steps closer to death
up the winding stair
as I pause at my own life to stare:
the hazy past with its angst, exhilaration,
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2020

'Elements in the body seem to prepare in their aching desire to return home saddled on the wheels of a morbid time splintered away from a collapsing dome.' - These lines aptly describes the pain agony of old age. Loved your poem, thank you.

0 0 Reply
Saroj Padhi

Saroj Padhi

ODISHA
Close
Error Success