Thursday, June 17, 2010

Stop And Rewind Comments

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As the sun flash instantly touches my eye
I look far to the whitened sky
As the sun rays light through the attached shiny cloud
I see your face smiling and laughing out loud
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Kareem Hany
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 22 June 2010

Great imagination, nice imagery, I like the poem

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The Lost.. 19 June 2010

this is wonderful kareem i really liked it :)

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Beautiful! Loved the imagery and the sense of time fleeting by. We at times dont take in all the beauty that surrounds us. Lovely wording; D

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