Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore
Not knowing how many
Tide and storms went washing by
Stood I still waiting for you!
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Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore Not knowing how many Tide and storms went washing by Stood I still waiting for you! Loved those lines and enjoyed this beautiful poem. Each line coming straight from heart. Thank you for sharing Geeta.
Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore Not knowing how many Tide and storms went washing by Stood I still waiting for you! Loved those lines and enjoyed this beautiful poem. Each line coming straight from heart. Thank you for sharing Geeta.
Time does not deter true love. How truly and touchingly said!
A poem with beautiful expression of feeling of long time waiting, may be not in actual incident of life but a poetical thought of expression of the waiting in philosophical terms and aging is a factor with its own limitations of mobility where one is compelled to depend upon the walking stick........wonderful and sorrowful imaginations which a blessed mind can only make it so beautiful.
Eyes set on the horizon standing still at the shore waiting, age advancing with stick in hand. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
Geetha this beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes.Stood I still waiting for you is very sweet and my favourite line in the poem really perfect poem I give it a ten
This poem reminds me Jay Shankar Prasad's Akash Deep. A beautiful write.
Read this tale of eternal waiting with a heavy heart...... The rising waves of the sea may be a mute witness to this patient and hopeful waiting.....! May he come riding on a galloping stallion and gladden your lovelorn heart! (Ha....Ha...ha..)
These shores will tell you the stories of my love for you. Lovely write.
Stood I still waiting for you! .... a lovely line or quote of a lover of her / his love, who never claimed but waited patiently being silent like Ahallya, to be recognized . Loved this platonic love Geetha.