Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Stood I Still Waiting For You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore
Not knowing how many
Tide and storms went washing by
Stood I still waiting for you!
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Amitava Sur 22 July 2014

Stood I still waiting for you! .... a lovely line or quote of a lover of her / his love, who never claimed but waited patiently being silent like Ahallya, to be recognized . Loved this platonic love Geetha.

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Savita Tyagi 21 July 2014

Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore Not knowing how many Tide and storms went washing by Stood I still waiting for you! Loved those lines and enjoyed this beautiful poem. Each line coming straight from heart. Thank you for sharing Geeta.

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Savita Tyagi 21 July 2014

Like a lonely bird I stood along the sea shore Not knowing how many Tide and storms went washing by Stood I still waiting for you! Loved those lines and enjoyed this beautiful poem. Each line coming straight from heart. Thank you for sharing Geeta.

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 July 2014

Time does not deter true love. How truly and touchingly said!

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A poem with beautiful expression of feeling of long time waiting, may be not in actual incident of life but a poetical thought of expression of the waiting in philosophical terms and aging is a factor with its own limitations of mobility where one is compelled to depend upon the walking stick........wonderful and sorrowful imaginations which a blessed mind can only make it so beautiful.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2014

Eyes set on the horizon standing still at the shore waiting, age advancing with stick in hand. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Noreen Carden 10 July 2014

Geetha this beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes.Stood I still waiting for you is very sweet and my favourite line in the poem really perfect poem I give it a ten

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014

This poem reminds me Jay Shankar Prasad's Akash Deep. A beautiful write.

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

Read this tale of eternal waiting with a heavy heart...... The rising waves of the sea may be a mute witness to this patient and hopeful waiting.....! May he come riding on a galloping stallion and gladden your lovelorn heart! (Ha....Ha...ha..)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 08 July 2014

These shores will tell you the stories of my love for you. Lovely write.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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