Stood A Banyan Yon Tree By Riverside! (A Natural Delight) Comments

great writing, my friend... but you know it isn`t a poem it is a song))) because i can hear a melody of your soul and see your mind there))) , your way of thinking

You are so expressive! Nature is a wonderland, but we live in concrete jungles. Now I really long to go live like Robinson Crusoe..

My sister & I played with mom & dad - aah, green ballerina! Now, tears tumble-down, a hustle and bustle in my heart Marina! It lives for donkey’s years with branches limitless, oh, royal czarina! What mixture of contrasting element with ease sentiment, sadness, appreciation, comedy, satire, vivid explanation and everything can be easily felt in these 3 lines. With utmost honesty, I appeal the poet to concentrate on these kinds of nature poems. Wonder flow of thoughts. A loud cheers to the poet!

Yonder! Stood a banyan tree by river side! Whoopee! Where my father and his father played, Great manifestations of nature being nurtured until the advent of casuarina tree in life to balance the rhythms like a ballerina....then the outcome was hilarious in poetic magnitude...t lives for donkey’s years with branches limitless....electronic bell ending thoughts.......compact poem i must say