You tell me
Your heart that loves me
Is pure as dew water;
You tell me
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wow! what a promise of love...insoluble immortal of the heart linger in the memory of the wind, build in the water loon of infinity.....my salute and wish to let this poem be sail of the waves of reality.....thank you dear friends...God bless....a 10 +++++
I had to comment on this lovely poem because it says it's words so well (shhh- and also because it looks you wrote it on my birthday- so it must be just for me?) smile..
scratched on air scribbled on water........... you write poems, which get completed in my mind....................
hey Kesav i liked ur poem.......good reflects many things together...touches life.. Winnie
golden letters filled with love may fade away but bloodstains remain blue always...........
She is engraved on your heart Kesav! Stony heart or not - 'Your love' she has got! *10* You are a 'stone pillar' in the community of poetry, great read! Rock On! ! Best regards my friend! Thad
Yes! so what? for that's how you love...engraving red on a dry stone. I loved your last stanza, but could it be your heart of stone be melted by an angelic and divine love? ...romantic in a very sense, showed only the true you... Maestro a 10 for i always love your composition...not flowery, just a straight to the point and always making sense.
a poem by a loving heart...! ! ! and a master of words... :)
I'm sure that poetry is running deep within you and not in the least superficial as that I have been finding in many writes of others here. Your truthful comparisons are excellent to muse over and I am sure that I may want to read your entire work. Thank you for the beauty of your thoughts. arya
the last stanza in this is purely magical....love love love it! ! ! ...great work
Fantastic flow of expressions.It seems to be one sided love.Best wishes from this old woman.Nice write.Thank you
An excellent poem Kesav with a most beautiful syntax. Best wishes, Andrew
Eswaran means God in my mother-tongue. Of course U r easwaran of poetry
im not a gr8 poet to comment on such a beautiful poem, but one can't deny the beauty. its very nice.
‘…stony; so what? ’ But engraving is there …nice conclusion…climaxed... Nifty conception touching heart Sir Voted 10+ hf Ms. Nivedita UK