Saturday, May 24, 2008

Stony, So What? Comments

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You tell me
Your heart that loves me
Is pure as dew water;
You tell me
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 April 2010

‘…stony; so what? ’ But engraving is there …nice conclusion…climaxed... Nifty conception touching heart Sir Voted 10+ hf Ms. Nivedita UK

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Antonio Liao 11 October 2009

wow! what a promise of love...insoluble immortal of the heart linger in the memory of the wind, build in the water loon of infinity.....my salute and wish to let this poem be sail of the waves of reality.....thank you dear friends...God bless....a 10 +++++

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Patti Masterman 27 August 2009

I had to comment on this lovely poem because it says it's words so well (shhh- and also because it looks you wrote it on my birthday- so it must be just for me?) smile..

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premji premji 17 July 2009

scratched on air scribbled on water........... you write poems, which get completed in my mind....................

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an indian man's love there that one...true sir

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Joseph Poewhit 06 May 2009

Has a hard definition to love

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Winnie Angel 26 December 2008

hey Kesav i liked ur poem.......good reflects many things together...touches life.. Winnie

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premji premji 13 December 2008

golden letters filled with love may fade away but bloodstains remain blue always...........

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

great as always...sir..............well penned

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Thad Wilk 29 November 2008

She is engraved on your heart Kesav! Stony heart or not - 'Your love' she has got! *10* You are a 'stone pillar' in the community of poetry, great read! Rock On! ! Best regards my friend! Thad

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

Yes! so what? for that's how you love...engraving red on a dry stone. I loved your last stanza, but could it be your heart of stone be melted by an angelic and divine love? ...romantic in a very sense, showed only the true you... Maestro a 10 for i always love your composition...not flowery, just a straight to the point and always making sense.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008

a poem by a loving heart...! ! ! and a master of words... :)

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, aryaindia 28 August 2008

I'm sure that poetry is running deep within you and not in the least superficial as that I have been finding in many writes of others here. Your truthful comparisons are excellent to muse over and I am sure that I may want to read your entire work. Thank you for the beauty of your thoughts. arya

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Viola Grey 18 August 2008

the last stanza in this is purely magical....love love love it! ! ! ...great work

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Indira Renganathan 16 August 2008

Fantastic flow of expressions.It seems to be one sided love.Best wishes from this old woman.Nice write.Thank you

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Andrew Blakemore 13 August 2008

An excellent poem Kesav with a most beautiful syntax. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ian Bowen 02 August 2008

Kesav, most enjoyable read.10/10 Ian

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Subbaraman N V 13 June 2008

An exquisite expression of the loving heart! Great. Congrats!

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premji premji 06 June 2008

Eswaran means God in my mother-tongue. Of course U r easwaran of poetry

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Richard Howardson 04 June 2008

im not a gr8 poet to comment on such a beautiful poem, but one can't deny the beauty. its very nice.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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